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My friend's political essay dismisses the objection I actually made. Should I still edit it?

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"People just want to protect their little empires," the draft says. That is apparently the answer to my question about representation.

My friend has asked me to tidy an essay supporting the merger of neighbouring councils. I asked how residents across a larger area would be represented. I haven't decided whether I support the merger. Her draft describes objections as officeholders defending their positions, without addressing the question I raised.

I can fix the commas. I'm less comfortable helping polish a piece that makes a reasonable concern sound like a selfish motive. She says I should write my own opposing essay if I disagree, but I don't think asking her to state an objection fairly requires me to oppose her conclusion.

How do I explain the difference between editing her writing and lending my help to an argument that misdescribes mine?

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Point to the passage and your actual question: how representation would work across the larger area. Ask whether she wants substantive feedback as well as punctuation. You can support her right to make the merger case without agreeing that this sentence answers your objection.

She may have encountered people defending their positions. That wouldn't establish that every concern about representation has the same motive. She can identify the particular argument she's criticising rather than make your question disappear inside a claim about everyone's intentions.

Don't demand equal space for every possible objection. The narrower request is that the objection she chooses to discuss be recognisable to someone who holds it. A short essay can be selective and still avoid substituting a convenient motive for a question.

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